Free Writing

The cashier looked at me with cold, hard, hating eyes. Clearly this wasn’t his choice for a job.

“May I help you?” His deep voice mixed with his acned face twisted into a grim frown. I handed him my item; a shirt for my father. He grabbed it and put it into a bag.

“No,no,no.” I corrected him, “I want it gift wrapped.” He gave a loud groan, like I was killing him, and turned around to the gift wrapping area of the counter. After a few minutes of ajusting and gearing himself for some real work, her turned to me: “What color?”  He asked.

Hmmm… I pondered this decision. If I get blue my father would know I’m upset, not working, and guyless. If I chose green I would just be trying to cover it up. And red would just cause my father to try and calm my emotions.

“Green.” I finally spoke to the teenager, who’s eye had glazed over with boredom. He began to remove green from the roll above his head.

“No, blue. I change my mind” I pointed to the next roll.

“Fine.” He put the green back.

“No! Red!” I screamed, startling the kid and a few grownups.

“Ok ma’am what color do you really want?” He asked

“I don’t know…” I whispered

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~ by Story on June 24, 2009.

4 Responses to “Free Writing”

  1. this was clever for being made up on the spot. good work :D

  2. hehe, i like this one. (:

    xox ellie.

  3. Your descriptive images are wonderful. Keep it up.

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